Tuesday, October 1, 2013

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“Oh, you know the one,” said his father. “The kid who’s been taking you to school in the morning.”

“...Did he tell you his name?”

“I don’t know.”

“Dad, this is important. Was it Nathan? Or Geoffrey?”

The man smirked. “Son, I honestly couldn’t tell you.”

Hector’s jaw clenched.

“I think he went up to your room.”

He eyed the staircase just beyond the kitchen door.

His father walked around him. “I have to go to work now, but I will be stopping by your school today.”

“What?”

“You have been skipping class, haven’t you? Your school has called several times, already, and I think I should follow up.”

“Uh, that’s not, ah... I mean--”

“Anyway, I will see you later.”

“Dad, wait--uh.”

The man stopped and turned.

“Please, just. Stay there for a minute.” He moved toward the staircase. “I gotta check on something in my room first, but... just... give me one minute, okay? D-don’t go anywhere.”

He folded his arms. “Fine. Just don’t keep me waiting.”

Hector scaled the steps in a hurry, making iron around his forearms as soon as his father was out of sight.

And there was the door to his room. It was closed. He had not left it that way. He opened it.

The first thing he noticed was the stench. And then he saw the body. It was human, limp and mounted on the wall. It had been eviscerated. Blood and entrails spilled onto Hector’s bed.

And perhaps it was because he was too appalled and disgusted, but at first, he didn’t realize who it was. It just looked like a mutilated corpse. But then the face registered.

It was Geoffrey.

He didn’t understand. Geoffrey was already dead? Hector’s head spun, trying to figure out how. Or why. Or anything at all. What the hell had happened here?

And then he noticed the message scrawled next to the body in blood. It read:

~For Hector~
I finally got myself a new body. You can have my old one. ~Love, Dad

17 comments:

  1. Votes at Top Web Fiction here are greatly appreciated. And a double-thank-you, because it’s been over a week since I last requested votes, and TZK has stayed in the top 10 the whole time. You guys rock.

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  2. Dun-dun---dunnnnnnnn!!!!

    TP

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  3. Frick.
    Fricking frick
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    WHY DID YOU KILL GEOFFERY'S BODY
    IT WAS TOO COOL FOR SCHOOL
    NOW HE IS GONNA GO TO THE SCHOOL
    BUT IN A NEW BODY
    YOU...
    YOU...
    ABBERATION!

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  4. HOLY CRAP!!
    At first I think that something more powerful got to Geoffry, but then that twist comes up?
    I wonder what happened/will happen to Hector's mom?

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  5. Dat twist>>>> Loving this story so much!

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  6. Holy shit. Definitely didn't see THAT one coming...

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  7. Yeah, back when he was younger (14-15) Geoffrey got involved in some whacked up shit in Gray Rock. (map for the win) Which is how He met hectors mother. And how Hectors 7 half-siblings came about. Later they will form a circle of elite servant aberrations, and set out to topple Abolish and remake Vanguard, and they'll all kick back drinking tea and playing video-games.

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  8. Woah! I am half sad, and excited about this. I'm sad about the fact Hector's dad for a better word is dead. However, I'm excited becuase this story is amazing! I wish it was tomorrow already.

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  9. I count this as turning the father into a puppet.

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  10. *gets up and slow claps*
    Well done sir.
    You have now managed to ascend to the same tier JK Rowling and Andrew Hussie have achieved for me.
    You are one of my favorite authors that I hate. Those that start killing people off left and right? Yeah. You're one of them. You should be proud. ^w^

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  11. That is one dedicated villain. "I will literally destroy my own body for no other reason than to fuck with you and everyone you love."

    Geoffrey is the best asshole.

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  12. When I saw that it was Geoffrey's body, I thought Geoffrey must have Nathan's body. But that note...I'm not ashamed to say I cried out like a little girl when I read that last line. I feel so bad. And it just had to happen when Hector was actually starting to communicate with his father.

    Frost, you.... I hate you....but I love you too. Dammit I dunno what I feel towards you now. Great work, man. This chapter really got me right in the feels. *claps* I'm glad you didn't cop out on this. There's no logical reason for Geoffrey to not have done anything to Hector's parents. And you pulled a move I didn't even see coming. Exemplary!

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  13. I want to feel bad for Hector but I just can't on this one, it's his own damn fault.
    He didn't even CONSIDER the possibility at any point, that the person on the other end of the text messages might not have been Colt. It had to be explicitly pointed out to him by Colt more or less twice before it sunk in, that was exactly the perfect time & situation to be paranoid in and he blew it now he's paying for it.

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  14. I love this story.

    And the diabolical mind that is Mr. Frost.

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