Thursday, January 23, 2014

Page 522 -- LX.

Chapter Sixty: ‘O, looming tempest...’
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Hector hadn’t realized just how good it would be to see everyone again. He and Garovel had only met Roman and the Queen briefly on that chaotic day in Sescoria, barely even two months ago now, but after everything that happened to him and everything that he knew had happened to them, it was like seeing his oldest friends again. And in a way, he supposed they actually were. They’d been in his thoughts so frequently, and of course, it helped that he’d been able to correspond with them over the phone as well.

Burning with embarrassment, he was still thrilled to shake hands with everyone.

“You look well,” said the Queen, her smile much warmer than Hector would have imagined.

“Ah--you--um... ah--”

You too, Your Majesty,’ laughed Garovel. ‘Hector is so glad to see you that he can’t even put it into words.

She looked different than he remembered. But then again, the last time he saw her, she’d been having a rather rough day. Here and now, she was nearly restored to that regal form that he’d seen in papers and television, the only difference being her commoner’s attire and general lack of cosmetics.

Voreese seemed the most pleased of anyone to be back. ‘So I hear you two have really been giving Abolish the middle finger lately. I require juicy details.

Seconded,’ added Mehlsanz.

Garovel only laughed harder.

Hector found himself confronted with Roman next. “Ah--uh, Mr. Roman, I can’t... I can’t thank you enough for all your help. I mean, your motorcycles and facilities and, uh...”

“Oh yeah,” said Roman, as if he’d forgotten. “No problem. Thanks for looking out for Gina while I was gone.”

“Oh, no, she was the one looking out for me,” said Hector. “I mean, I would’ve... I would’ve been screwed without her help.”

Gina smacked him on the shoulder. “Continue.”

Hector had to laugh.

Roman seemed different, too, though Hector hadn’t really gotten all that good of a look at him during their previous encounter. Roman was wearing his glasses now, and combined with his silky black tie and blood red waistcoat, the man had an air of prominence about him that Hector hadn’t noticed before.


  1. ‘Hector is so glad to see to see you that he can’t even put it into words.”
    to see x 2

  2. Allies united
    I know I shouldn't mind it
    But for what has been sighted
    I can't help but be delighted

  3. Snowtail the KhajiitJanuary 23, 2014 at 8:37 AM

    Awww. Hector isn't used to having friends…Both sad, and cute. X3

  4. "the man had an air of deference"
    -a way of behaving that shows respect for someone or something
    -respect and esteem due a superior or an elder
    -affected or ingratiating regard for another's wishes
    Given that we haven't seen anything about he acts with the Queen, only a description of his appearance, are you sure deference is the word you meant?

  5. It was the word I mean, yeah, referring to the "respect" connotation and not "a way of behaving." But I can see how that would be confusing. I'll change it to "prominence."

  6. "He'd been able [to] correspond with them..."

  7. Not quite fixed...
    "Hector is so glad to see [to] you that he can’t even put it into words."


    Fixed, thanks.

  9. I'm not sure I understand how he could have an air of respect for his superiors without a superior to show deference TO...

  10. Your subconscious. It is telling you that Hector and Roman are going to be an item.

  11. Snowtail the KhajiitJanuary 25, 2014 at 10:28 AM

    Aaaand here come the crack fics. XDD

  12. Damn, it really is good to see the gang all (mostly) here

  13. I love your rhymes mate