Friday, July 19, 2013

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He had not forgotten what he heard the night before. Those five people with reapers had wanted the Queen to live, of course; but then, neither had they expressly forbidden him from killing her. So as far as he was concerned, he was not technically disobeying Mr. Boulder.

Geoffrey’s grin only widened the more he thought about it. “This is going to upset some people I know,” he told the advisor as they exited together. “But that only makes me want to do it even more. I wonder what they will do.”


Chapter Sixteen: ‘Trust thy suspicious heart...’
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The last day of meetings with the Queen’s Guard had begun. Helen sat across from yet another discomforted young man in abject silence.

Having Mehlsanz observe the castle for the past few days had been a rather convenient means of gathering information. Only two of Helen’s brothers, Nathaniel and David, lived with her in Belgrant Castle, but all seven brothers were currently visiting. They had, of course, rushed to be by her side as soon as they heard the news of the assassination attempt. In fact, one of the reasons she had decided to employ this strategy was for the peace it afforded her from their incessant “advisement.”

To her mind, the most likely culprit was her oldest brother, Prince Gabriel, as he had been the presumed heir to the throne before her ascension. And yet, according to Mehlsanz, Gabriel was not behaving strangely. If he was guilty, then he was hiding it well enough to fool someone he couldn’t even see. However, Mehlsanz could not keep eyes on him at all times while still observing the others as well.

The young Lynnette Edith had thus far proven loyal. Mehlsanz had not seen her tell anyone of Helen’s orders, even when asked by her comrades, but again, Mehlsanz could only give an incomplete account of events.

4 comments:

  1. Hello, I am enjoying the story! In paragraph two, I think it should read "only makes me want to..."

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  2. Sorry, I see another one... In paragraph two of the second post I think it should be either "means to gather information" or "means of gathering information". Keep up the great story!

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    1. Fixed. Thank you for the catches and for reading.

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  3. Oh wow, I was right bout Geoffrey! That's...! I think that's the first time I actually called something in this story!

    Be advised, I'm calling Mehlsanz "Mehl" from now on. So there.

    Helen believes that Nathaniel is the guilty party but she wants ro know who coerced him into it right?

    I hope Hector and Garovel meet up with Helen, Mehl, and Lynnette soon. Cause Hell is coming their way...

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