Sunday, July 12, 2015

Page 1058

Ibai observed Reever carefully. He’d had a suspicion that the guy would be able to find the other Invisibility users for him. Presumably, they needed some means of maintaining communication, even during their deep cover operations.

But all Reever did was place his hand in front of his own eyes like a blindfold and then look around. “There. Over two rooms. You’ll want to appear next to the hearth so as to avoid bumping into anyone.”

“Alright,” said Ibai, preparing to jump again. “My favorite color is obviously brown by the way.”


Emiliana couldn’t stop staring. The rifts in her vision were beginning to drive her mad. The stationary ones were no longer bothering her, though--or at least, not as much. Inconvenient as it might have been, she felt like she could get accustomed to having her vision uniformly obscured. But the rifts that moved. Those were another story.

Why were they moving? Were they the result of something that was moving inside of her eyes now? Not the most comforting question, she felt.

So she stared at them, determined to discern some kind of useful information for herself.

And gradually, she did.

They weren’t the product of something living inside of her eyes, she decided, because if that were the case, then the rifts should have moved all over the place, up the walls and onto the ceiling and even across her family member’s faces.

But they didn’t.

They were a bit disorienting to look at, almost to the point of forcing her to turn away, but they didn’t actually move that much. They stayed on the ground, hovered around the door, and generally kept their distance from everyone. Their movements were bound by the room, she realized, not her eyesight.

Which confused her even more. If they weren’t caused by something inside her eyes, then what were they?


  1. Wait, has Emiliana actually been seeing the cloaked Abolish members this whole time?!

  2. Vincent Atd[perspherspley]July 12, 2015 at 7:40 AM

    An eyes that can somehow see them...

  3. Holy crap now that i think about it, you may be right. she gave herself cat eyes Right? Cats randomly do hiss at a wall or empty space...they were seeing invisible people/ghosts all along.

  4. *Jumping from joy* finally caught up with your releases...sure (if someone didn't get it, the jumping from joy is a sarcasm) .
    Was to bored to death and had no other reading material...wanted to read this slower :( [Jumped from page 5xx to here in less than ten hours and I've wanted to congratulate myself with my slow reading pace before this happened]

    I'm in love with your story. Thank you for the great read, when I'll have the opportunity, I'll donate ;)

    Oh...and finally part of her power is revealed. I just hope that she can figure it out in time....
    *thumbs up*

  5. Bring out the distraction topic: favourite colour. Back-up: ice-cream! xD

  6. yeah, I didn't want to jump to conclusions, but these "distortions" she's seeing do act exactly like cloaked Infilifilers. I wonder if she's about to see them all turn visible as Reever gets threatened by Ibai... or if just a couple of them will.

  7. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying. :)

  8. Green. Cookie dough. But not green cookie dough, because that would be concerning.