tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post6172352186967625877..comments2024-03-25T22:06:48.964-04:00Comments on The Zombie Knight Saga: Page 491George M. Frosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02775956087855415064noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-38999381468490141422014-08-16T11:41:08.512-04:002014-08-16T11:41:08.512-04:00This is interesting and all...but I kinda wanna ge...This is interesting and all...but I kinda wanna get back to Lynn and the others. I wanna see Hector get hip tossed by IsabelleBlaednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-41996878230041031552014-01-16T07:35:16.621-05:002014-01-16T07:35:16.621-05:00People forget that in any invasion it's easy t...People forget that in any invasion it's easy to take land. The challenge is in holding it from the people with the motivation that this kind of thing creates.shadowmaster13noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-82631684773538282162014-01-12T20:33:33.319-05:002014-01-12T20:33:33.319-05:00Anytime Frosty~!Anytime Frosty~!Snowtail the Khajiitnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-33226325829473695872014-01-12T20:18:47.461-05:002014-01-12T20:18:47.461-05:00Decided to just rework the whole paragraph. Thanks...Decided to just rework the whole paragraph. Thanks for the check, Snow.George M. Frosthttp://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-55074290172755263542014-01-12T19:34:35.433-05:002014-01-12T19:34:35.433-05:00Eh, just leave it. I only wanted to point it out j...Eh, just leave it. I only wanted to point it out just in case it was a mistake. The only problem my brain had with it was really the comma. It would have flowed better if the besides came after the comma.<br />But it's your call Frosty. :3Snowtail the Khajiitnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-17584725943413619782014-01-12T19:01:22.964-05:002014-01-12T19:01:22.964-05:00Eh. I did put that there intentionally. I can see ...Eh. I did put that there intentionally. I can see how it might feel out of place, but it's kind of a stylistic thing. <br /><br />Hmm. Not sure if I wanna change it. Hmm, hmm.George M. Frosthttp://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-69900683730202168202014-01-12T18:43:39.409-05:002014-01-12T18:43:39.409-05:00"Most of the time, these catacombs were pitch..."Most of the time, these catacombs were pitch dark and cold besides, feeling almost haunted." I don't know if it's just me or what, but the 'besides' doesn't really fit there.Snowtail the Khajiitnoreply@blogger.com