tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post1482882781337712693..comments2024-03-25T22:06:48.964-04:00Comments on The Zombie Knight Saga: Page 765George M. Frosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02775956087855415064noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-48046687527802402632015-07-14T16:00:37.667-04:002015-07-14T16:00:37.667-04:00For some reason I feel that this was Geoffrey'...For some reason I feel that this was Geoffrey's grandfather (Dozer?) leaving abolish.Sebastian Knightnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-12395772178316099462015-02-03T17:26:49.658-05:002015-02-03T17:26:49.658-05:00If there were innocents there, it could have been ...If there were innocents there, it could have been Sai-Hee acting anonymously, but I doubt it.Genoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-33280967623220410122014-08-11T18:21:49.568-04:002014-08-11T18:21:49.568-04:00I use commas to imply pauses and other spoken rhyt...I use commas to imply pauses and other spoken rhythms all the time.Z.n. Singernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-79893673358200702752014-08-11T18:21:20.350-04:002014-08-11T18:21:20.350-04:00Uh huh...interesting. Servants being what they are...Uh huh...interesting. Servants being what they are, whoever did that is still a player. And a complete unknown. If one servant did it...then we're probably talking an unknown on the level of the emperors.Z.n. Singernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-5630791269851965562014-07-24T14:28:07.790-04:002014-07-24T14:28:07.790-04:00Strictly speaking, no, it's not correct, but w...Strictly speaking, no, it's not correct, but when it comes to dialogue, comma rules get kinda wonky. Wendy is pausing there, even though the sentence structure doesn't necessitate it. <br /><br />Alternatively, I could've used an ellipsis ("...") to achieve a similar effect, but personally, I felt that would've also added sense of hesitance on Wendy's part, which wasn't what I wanted.George M. Frosthttp://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3731978491355560966.post-26264698834962644082014-07-24T14:15:28.536-04:002014-07-24T14:15:28.536-04:00Maybe typo:
"And all around it, were the head...Maybe typo:<br />"And all around it, were the heads and mutilated corpses of everyone we knew to be responsible"<br /><br />Is the comma correct?Ankounoreply@blogger.com